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Re: The Color Blue
As I read this, it gave me a sense of suspense. That's a good trait that every story must have...(in some way). I also would like to congradulate you on ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Global Suicide-Chapter 1: Cause and Effect
Ok as you see in my chapter 1, there are some grammatical errors that you have stated and thats fine. I think I am going to change this up a ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Global Suicide-Chapter 1: Cause and Effect
[pre] I hear it everyday...on the news, in the paper, and even from friends and family. I try to forget it all, but the constant reminder of it as a ...
Apr 8, 2008
