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  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    3/10 Not gonna expound upon this, as I don't know what's wrong with it, I just find it extremely boring. --- Jumpyspot had nothing to write on the bottom sentence, ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    2/10 You basically said what was wrong with your own sentence when you were talking about mine. xD --- Explosions filled the air with chaotic sounds that was a mix ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    2/10 Another mystery novel opener that we have seen too often. --- She seems to be taking me seriously I thought. We should kill her.

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    3/10 Intensely boring. A first sentence should tell us about a character, just a smidgen. It should leave hints at the story, and lastly, it should be great. That was ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    6/10 I seem to be handing out a lot of these. Again, it seems like you're trying to hard to have people rate it 10/10 or stuff. --- If there's ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    6/10 Though, again, it does intrigue, it feels ripped out of any beginning of a paranormal fantasy or a mystery novel. --- Hello, and welcome to I try, in short ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    6/10 though it does intrigue, it seems like your trying to get me to say that it's cool. --- The Jeep was old and battered and it didn't bode well ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Gender Inequality in Film Survey

    et

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Media Reviews Re: his own demons

    And what hast with haste been abolished did take years to garner. The wheat from the chaff is not almighty.

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Media Reviews Re: his own demons

    A face from the shadows says "delete your internet presence, surely it will haunt your presidential run, if not your nightmares

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Writing Activities Re: Extinction

    ,

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Writing Activities Re: Extinction

    Extinction

    Aug 23, 2014


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