JuliaCatop

Hey! Thanks for reviewing my work! I agree with you about the dialogue, and I think reading it out loud would help me a lot. I honestly suck at dialogue, ...

Thank you so much for this response. This was my final piece for a first year university writing course, but I feel like I still want it to become something ...

Thank you so much for the review! I wrote this fairly quickly, so it's quite raw. I'll add the commas for sure though. :)