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I've feared heartbreak and I've experienced it. I've fallen in love with her lovely eyes that I have not truly met. I will remember that love is not for me. ...

I really like your poem sometimes we all come to feel that way of feeling fear, a very nice job. It sorta didn't make sense you knew but we would ...

This Poem very nice may I add, but a couple suggestions my dear you express but try to express a little more by telling the reader what they should know, ...

Preface Can you change against your will? Fight every with every ounce of your strength. What if you couldn't win can you still try for the ones you love will ...

Preface Can you change against your will? Fight every with every ounce of your strength. What if you couldn't win can you still try for the ones you love will ...

So there I was thiking as I was about to get ran over by a red truck in the middle of popular Los Angeles, California. So many things went through ...

[b] So as I was there thinking as i was about to get ran over by a red truck in popular Los Angeles, California. So many things went through my ...

I would say that this poem is okay but there is potential the poem was great but it could be better putting in the tought. I like the idea which ...

I love this Poem even if it was short it said alot. you can say alot with very few words. I found no grammar or punctuation errors. There was nothing ...

You are danger you break everything in sight. Hoping that you will fill your self esteem within time. Luring every heart to come to you, Not knowing that some actually ...

He told you he loved you. He told you hed never leave but today you come in schock of what you see. Staring out the window you see him with ...

Characters The Girls- Brianna(9th Grader), Mariana(11thgrader) Gracie(11th Grader) Kimberly- (9th Grader) Jessica(11th Grader) Diana(9th Grader) Crystal(Berenice)-(9th Grader) The Boys- Alex(9th Grade

Story is okay but you have to think of the rational things and if it makes sense well a sotry doesnt have to make sense but a good story has ...

Just to be clear on it yes it is a good story but when you write a sentece you have to think if it makes sense and its written properly ...

Ok you have already been introduced to the characters and plot Now for Chapter 1 CHAPTER1 - CLEARSKIES HIGH SCHOOL (9th grade hall) ( passing period) "You know what I ...