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Re: Finite
That was pretty good. I liked that it got me thinking. And I do believe it is a poem. Wonderful job.
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: The Jacket
Wow! That was wonderful. I really enjoyed reading this. It was a sweet story, well-written, and simply wonderful. As I do most of the time, I did find one or ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P-- part 9
I enjoyed reading this. As I do, most of the time, I found a couple grammar and/or spelling mistakes. Considering that I read this before I read your other works, ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Little Bird
Awesome Adriana! This poem definitely made me think, it made me question a few things, it was really powerful. And that's how a poem should be. In my opinion. They ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Story 6 (Part 2)
Windu called, “Hello boys.” One of them returned, “Greetings Sir.” “Looks like you three have a new general. I would like you all to meet, Jedi Knight, Judy Gunyar.” She ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Mud
I meant to say 'Maus' in that review. Autocorrect isn't always correct. Ironic. I reiterate, well done.
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Mud
Wow! That was an amazing work. I congratulate and compliment you on a wonderful job. I did catch a few grammar errors, as I often do. Also, besides being covered ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Are They Really Who You Think They Are?
This is definitely a classic tale. I honestly enjoyed it very much. As I've told a few others, I did notice a couple spelling errors. I understand that some of ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Dark Wrath: Chapter Two
I really, really liked this one Soul. Though I did catch some grammar mistakes, (as you should know that I do) I enjoyed it very much. Perhaps it is because ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Story 6 (Part 1)
Judy Gunyar fingered the little medallion that hung from a chain around her neck. The small token that depicted the symbol of the Jedi Order on one side, and a ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: The Bus Stop
Well, I must congratulate you on a very nice piece of work. However, I have noticed that there are a few grammar mistakes, which, if you knew me, you'd know ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Footprints On The Beach: Part One
I really like this work, HereBeMonsters. Though I'm a bit confused in the fact that I don't know who some of your characters are. I've been told this same thing. ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Dark Wrath: Chapter One
I thought it was definitely an amazing script. I want to read more and more. Though there are very few grammar mess-ups, I can't find much fault with it. Great ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Story 96 (Part I)
I honestly like it. But I'm certainly eager to see what others think of it so far.
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Story 96 (Part I)
He walked into the cockpit of his ship. He stepped up to his right-hand-man, a Weequay with a shot-up leg and a stubborn tone in his voice. “We are going ...
Sep 10, 2011
