JudyG710

For my friend out there. This is for you.

I found this kinda funny to read actually. I mean, I never thought of "bi-polar love" meaning you'd continuously want to kill the one you love. I find it a ...

Wow. This was incredible! Truly, I found it very entertaining, deep, and emotional. I found one grammar/spelling error. That first line in the paragraph, "A pessimists cannot have friends." There ...

Overall, I kind of liked this piece. It was a good extension to an incredible story. It was pretty descriptive, though I found quite the number of grammar errors, as ...

I read Romeo and Juliet last year in English, and am ashamed to say that I haven't read it again since. But reading this, I feel as though I've never ...

I know this has a lot of dialogue, I'm working on it. Until I figure something out, please enjoy this how it is. Later that night, Judy contacted the Viceroy. ...

Well said Skay. I agree, except for the flow thing. I liked the flow of it. But that is just my opinion. Great job with this mi Pateessa! Your poems ...

this is antulio in judy 4th 5th and 6th period nice poems i especially like a controversy of the dying dawn

It is quite cute. Who says toilet plungers can't be adorable?

Other than a few grammar/spelling errors, I found nothing wrong with this piece. It was well-written, funny, sweet. Overall, I enjoyed it very much. All I can honestly say about ...

Oh my gosh Pateessa! I loved those! They were deep and emotional and just incredible to read. I know I've already read most of them, but still... they're awesome! Continue ...

I'm not really much of a lyric person, but I really liked this one. It was charming, entertaining, and I felt a sense of loyalty after reading it. It was ...

Wow. I very much enjoyed the strong emotional touch you added to this story. I must say, that I found some grammar errors, but I tend to, so that's not ...

Wow! Being a HUGE Star Wars fan, I was very impressed with this piece. I did catch a few grammar mistakes, as I tend to do. Such as, "His lightsaber ...

After a couple minutes, they found the holotable and took turns playing against each other. Making his move, Starlighter stated, “What else do you think Judy will do differently as ...