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Re: Niebla's Reviews [Closed]
I have other parts to this story, but I wasn't sure which ones you've read yet, if you have read any. So, I'll just put this here. Thanks. Uh... If ...
Feb 4, 2012 -
Re: 2011 YWS Most Awards
I don't think I am popular enough to get nominated, and I don't think I know enough people to nominate anyone. Maybe next year, cause it does look like fun. ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: chapter 2 of Calisan and the Lantern of Deceit
A wonderful continuation to a seemingly great story. Quite honestly, I don't have much to write about. It was well-written with those very few grammatical errors. I liked the beginning. ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: My first page of my first story. Thoughts ? (1st draft)
Hello. First, I would like to point out that you did not need the apostrophe in "horse's". You are trying to make it plural, so the apostrophe is not needed. ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: chapter 1 of Calisan and the Lantern of Deceit
I really do like the story. The concept is great, and I like the characters and the descriptions that were in there. The beginning line I had a minor problem ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Star Wars: If Luke had gone to the Dark side: Part 2
Achuta. I'm not sure if you remember me. I made a comment on your Anakin picture. I'm back! :D Well, I must first of all point out that I actually ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Welcome to Apollo! Nothing works...
Quite honestly, when I first got on the new layout, I thought it was the iPad that was messing with me. Somewhat glad that it's not the iPad. :) But ...
Dec 25, 2011 -
Re: My Extracurricular Activities
Nice job Justagirl. I know a few people who go horseback riding. It seems fun, but I've never tried it. That's not important though. I liked that you not only ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: My Extracurricular Activities
Nice job Justagirl. I know a few people who go horseback riding. It seems fun, but I've never tried it. That's not important though. I liked that you not only ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: May the World Burn, Chapter One
Achuta Misfit. (Means hello. I'm such a geek. :D) Anyway, you said you wanted a review, so here's one for you. I found this work to be incredible! Quite honestly, ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Good Beginning?
Yes, that does appear to be a good start to a novel. :) If this has any indication to the actual story, I can't wait to read it. :D Though, ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Anakin Skywalker
Achuta. (if you are as big a fan as me, or if you have talked to me before on chat, you should know what this means) ;) (or you are ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Reflecting on Our Past, Anticipating Our Future
Amazing! I had to start off with that, cause it's true. You wrote an amazing lyric. I loved reading it, and I bet you loved writing it. :) How old ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Winter's love.
Hello. I shall start off with saying that this was incredible! It was deep and sad and emotional and much more. I do agree it was kinda long, but "size ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: More Than A Friend
I'd like to point out to everyone that this was just a school project I had to get done. I wasn't really trying to make it extremely perfect or anything, ...
Dec 8, 2011
