JoyceSparrows

Hi! This was a very interesting piece to read. I absolutely loved all the descriptions used. The only problem is that I don’t have a clue about what’s going on. ...

I met her on the jungle gym. She was standing on the bridge wearing a blue dress with white polka dots—so was I. With the few words that were passed ...

I enjoyed reading this, but let me help you with your grammer and puncuation a bit. How could anything matter to him now? Yeah , people always complain on Facebook ...

Really great poem! I enjoyed reading it. There's just one thing that kind of sticks out for me And I write this on my hand Not in paper, like I ...

Thanks a lot for helping me with the punctuation. I really appreciate it! I have always pronounced shone like the name Shawn... obviously I have been saying it wrong my ...

I really interesting concept. I myself have thought about this before. Even though the chances of these things happen may may be slim, it happens to someone and you could ...

I enjoyed reading this. I really liked the style of writing that you used. I'm sorry for not giving you any constructive criticism, but I'm new at this and I ...

I really need help with the grammar in my poetry. I am not sure how to punctuate it properly. Looking up eyes brimming with tears Looking back at all those ...