JoyceSparrows

Welcome YWS! I hope you will enjoy it here. Just one question before I begin. Is this supposed to be a novel or just a short story? I was posted ...

This is the first chapter of my first novel. Exciting, isn't it?I stayed up crazy late so that I could finish this. So um, yeah... read and review away! ***1904*** ...

I got super excited about this and went ahead and posted the prologue of my novel; Rosemary . The story is set in the Edwardian era in Ontario, Canada. It’s ...

This is my first time posting a novel. I've just started writting it, so I don't have any of the actual chapters ready yet. I know this is very short, ...

Hello! I think this is pretty good for your first time at writing dramatic poetry. You did a good job with expressing the feeling that a boy might have, although ...

That was absolutely incredible. Normally I don’t like reviewing a story unless I have some critics to give, but I really couldn’t help it. Honestly, I don’t understand how you ...

As you can see, this story is written completely in dialogue. It was writing prompt. I would really appreciate your comments. *edit* This is set in the 1930s. “Hello?” “Hello ...

I enjoyed this story. I have always been against abortions myself and I thought that this was good. the night he rapped me Rapped: He rapped on the door. Raped: ...

YAY CANADA the place where the snow never melts (I don't know about you, but here in Edmonton there's still a ton of it on the ground.) We all live ...

Hello! I have got to say that this is the longest short story I have ever read. Generally, people don’t like reviewing something this long. I can give you some ...

I liked this. Sure it was short, but honestly, I don't think anything needs to be added to it. Lots of us have been in similar situations, and we know ...

For a while I thought you might have given up. I’m glad you didn’t! All the mistakes have seemingly been caught, so I don’t really have much to say except ...

Hey! I liked the idea you have going, but it’s just not a story. You need to think about adding to it, because right now it’s just a thought. It ...

I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked the way the character of Rose was developed more. I was too involved in the reading to look for any nitpicks. To answer ...

That was a cute story. I really liked the voice you gave to the dog. The only problem I have is with this sentence: the lady's foot hit ground,the ground ...