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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you, really! I'm glad you liked it. Just a quickie question: I kept the character descriptions vague so that everyone could fill it in with their own mind's image, ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you, really!

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Cool! The quote thing is a tiny little coding thing. You just type [quote][/quote ] without that space and put the quote you want in the middle.

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Also, do you know how to do the quote thing? Because if not, I can tell you.

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you for your review, really! Thanks for all of your advice. I will definitely be following most of it. It was a rough draft I muddled through in about ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    Thank you for all of your advice! You're right as I look back on it... way too many commas. I'll definitely take your grammatical criticisms. It seems like you... like ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Falling

    Thanks for the reviews, really! I appreciate your comments, really. I know you said you didn't like the ending, but the entire dream was supposed to be a metaphor for ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you so much! Really. I made summer start to encroach on the other seasons to symbolize global warming. It seems like Summer, to me, just wants to fill up ...

    Apr 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Yeah, trust me, I completely get the %s and numbers. Thank you, really. I get why you'd say I used "perhaps" too many times. :D

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you, really! I'm glad you liked it. Do you think the actual writing was okay? Not the story, just the writing itself? I was wondering if you had any ...

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thanks, really. :D It's not a poem, but I was trying to be poetic.

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diary Entry

    Thank you. Truly. I've never been in a situation like that, but I tried to imagine what it would be like. And then I wrote it out.

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you, really! That was my goal, make them like old friends. I tried to personify them as I tend to get feelings with them, but I'm sure other interpretations ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Thank you so, so much! Really. Your advice is good. I think I'll keep the ending, but other stuff you mentioned I'll definitely change. I will keep admiring your work ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diary Entry

    Hey! I completely get what you're saying. I think a poet means different things to different people. For example, a poet to me can invoke emotions with words, make me ...

    Apr 22, 2020


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings