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Thanks for the comment. I think things were a bit unclear because, um, I was being a bit of an idiot taking a bit that was generic or whatever, and ...

This is a very short (800 words, my whole book is about 130,000 or something stupid in this same, rubbish style), very bad sample of my book, as I said ...

I really enjoyed it; the description is detailed, yet ambiguous enough to create a sense of unknown which is... chilling. You’ve got a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, it’s ...

Fine. I'll delete that. But I would appricate it if the comment by GryphonFledgling, especially the bit about christian beliefs, at least being cut/edited. Thank you. No offence intended. Anyway, ...

I'd agree with Sumi, it sounds a lot like Pratchett or Stewart and Riddell, which is good, though, 'the fire' that you suggested that destroyed Crim's life is a bit ...

Yeah, I think it’s really good, deep and original; alot of room to expand and histroy/anatomy of werewolves. The descriptions flow with the narrative and plot, which I think is ...

Hey, I'm Josh... which is reasonably obvious. I'm just kind of looking around so if I do something stupid, it's not my fault. I've been writing the same book for ...