JosephDean

False Flashdrive or Memory Card?

To-may-toes. Llamas or camels?

The rising action. If I could write the beginning and the climax and completely ignore everything in between, oh how fun that would be :P

Banned for being wordy.

As always, most of the below is just commas, lmao. Don't worry too much. This story is great :) “You taste wonderful – your blood is richer than the blood ...

Lol, I'm so tired of nitpicking today; someone else can tackle the few commas. But I will just point out a few things still in my ratty old t-shirt, T-shirt, ...

Since Jospeh (spelling?) has already nit-picked for you, I'll do Characters/Plot. "Joseph"? It's not that hard to spell :P ------ I was really bored for a few minutes, so I ...

Banned because you're asleep right now :)

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Chastise v.t. punish, esp. corporally. The New American Webster Handy College Dictionary Third Edition. Closest book at hand. Ahahaha. I laughed a good few minutes over that. Nice.

Linkin Park Bullet for My Valentine Wednesday 13

*before reading* Wait, so the Chapter Three that I just reviewed... so you have a different Revised version up where you edited out the kiss then? If so, let me ...

I was amazed by how naked I felt, though I was wearing more layers today than usual, deciding to go on the white singlet to pull down over my skirt ...

Lol, I get what you said about people thinking it was basically a Twilight fanfic. It does resemble it in ... well just about every way :P Then again, it's ...

I'm physically unable to tell a short story as well. First, a few nitpicks that I don't think have been already pointed out: “We do? Aw, I hate that horrid ...