JosephDean

History is vital to world-creating. Wars. Racism. Trade. Imports/exports. Government. Map out the last hundred years before you do anything in the present. It's a lot more fun than it ...

(100th reply to this thread here. oh yes. :D) You know you're a writer when you can pick out various story ideas from catching the ends of sentences of random ...

How do you make the words rotate like that? It's a GIF image I emoticon-ized it on MSN the moment I saw it :D

Wow, adi, so sorry it took me forever to get to this, lol. One quick thing And I wish that I were fifteen again was No, it is "were" when ...

I think you mean bag of chips. I know you probably had this sentence twice for "dramatic effect" but it kind of distracted me from the what you want. Yeah ...

Well, all of my grammatical and punctuational nitpicks have all ready been pointed out, but I will say this... Suddenly the scenery changed. Suddenly, everything disappeared. Not only should you ...

Authour's Note: I decided to group together the parts into "blocks." I don't know if I'll make Block II in someone else's point of view, or if I will switch ...

Well I just spent two whole minutes with my jaw dropped, staring at the computer screen. And I had just gotten out of grace period, too! >____> ((I pretty much ...

Thank you so much, Ashley!! I edited my post; hopefully Jacob's part sounds a little better. That poor boy is going to undergo so many personality changes :P Also, you ...

If you wouldn't mind... Tomorrow Does Not Exist I. II. III. IV. I don't like throwing stories at people, lol, so if there's anything I can do in return, please ...

He killed her with one of the knives on the counter top. I didn't want to just bluntly state that he grabbed a knife and slit her throat - even ...

A few nitpicks at first Pictures of horses and green meadows whipped by, *comma or semicolon* I didn't have the effort to stare at them. The many colors [s]around me[/s] ...

I'm sorry that it took so long for me to finish this part. I want to say thanks to the few of you who have actually taken the time to ...

Okay... Let's take this one step at a time, shall we? :) Eight periods in the life: Halloween Is "the" really necessary? Is it a specific life that requires "the"? ...

Phew, I just read all of the previous chapters and then this one. The only main issues I saw where punctuation and grammar usage, which had all been pointed out. ...