JosephDean

:) I haven't been online to YWS in *forever*. I've actually decided to stop posting stuff here a long while ago. However! I cannot resist the New Private Message alerts ...

Hey, Astrid! Okay so I hadn't logged into YWS in almost a year, but then I got a notification of your message and figured I had to come back at ...

*claps* Oh this was great. At first I was thinking, "Wow this is kinda long," but oh I'm glad I read all of it. :D I can be somewhat of ...

What do you mean when the woman tries to make false memories and the MC says that the woman was completely faithful? (stupid question...I know) Anyways, I always do love ...

Pay attention to your capitalisation and apostrophe usage. Don't regret posting it; it served a purpose - you received advice for future posts. I understand the "deeper meaning" that you ...

Lilymoore, :) If I ever do, I'll definitely let you know. x] Saphirra, :D thanks so much!!

Much thanks to both of you! I don't know if I'll ever expand this (probably not as it was just a school assignment, haha), but I'll definitely consider those suggestions, ...

Wow, it's pretty good. Nice change of style that a lot of the other fifteen-year-old boys around here use (i.e. profanity every three words). The only grammatical/punctuational thing I would ...

I wrote this last month as one of our Creative Writing assignments. As such, it is very short, and not well written. I only uploaded it at the request of ...

Okay, I'm not going to go through a nitpick review because that'd take too long :P As far as content goes, I stand by what I said on Clad in ...

Banned because I haven't gotten to ban anyone in a while.

Banned for having a funny signature.

Why? Blue is so... common. Type in some odd colour that no one else uses. like this or something lol. just use "color=#~~~~~~" as your code. put in six random ...

I really like it! Just one thing that I question - so everyone around the world is committing suicide? It'd be kind of hard to spin that though =/ Maybe ...

I'm not really that well-versed in critiquing poetry, but I have to say this was great. I liked how the first stanza keeps the five syllable count all the way ...