Jordrake

I barely ever write reviews. No offense to any of the writers here, but it's hard to grasp my attention in the first paragraph. Normally I lose interest. This had ...

Not bad at all. The opening works well, leading a natural flow into the slower events of the rest of the peice. As fight scenes go, it's fluid and easy ...

While there isn't much to them yet, the characters are quite interesting. The emotions they feel seem real, even if they could be presented in a more subtle manner. Rather ...