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Re: another miscellaneous face
MAN U s****. Forgive me, but I don't have another word for that @%!#$# team. The mere sight of Alex Fergie irritates me till I want to cut off his ...
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: A horrible place, this old house. (Over 16 Only)
I didn't get what happened in the end. Apart from that, there are a few mistakes that can be put down to construction mistakes as well as typing errors. And ...
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: Bound for Glory: Part two (Title change in works)
To be honest, I was disappointed the way the hero was not even seen properly before we know he is dead. This has got plenty of action. Just a suggestion, ...
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: IT'S WHAT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR (well, not really...)
HA HA !! Everyone's got excuses. I'm open . You can send whatever you want to me. I... don't mean whatever you want. :o No rude images or messages, OK!! ...
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: War Movies based on Literature
Any names of war films based on war literature would be warmly received :) . It's for our School Exhibition.
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: For Daddy
The first four lines should really get it through to your Dad. Make him feel proud, it has I bet. Maybe Shakespeare or Tennyson would not have been overly impressed ...
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: The Crush on the Clerk
The anti-climax was well timed. As it is, it is a feat in itself to have got in a climax and an anti- in such a short space.
Dec 13, 2005 -
Re: Asher
I honestly love it. And the gaps between chapters are almost seeming planned. The diction is very good, so are the descriptions. The way the history was presented through a ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Labels I
Tremendous. It's a life of a girl I would never like to get close with put in a nutshell. I really don't have much to say, the life was so ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Suicidal Mind
Even if you had not said you were in a rush, I would have got it.
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: uh... whatever
However hard I try, I cannot seem to find any sense. And it isn't a nonsensical poem as well. If I take 3-4 lines at a time, it's OK, but ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Read This! It's Great!
The title's really catchy, isn't it, but I guess it's unfair. Dogs are usually like that, aren't they, jumping from one mate to another
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: Pickup
I think it's good as it is. The reader perceives the whole feeling, something he has probably felt so many times himself. The 'romantic intensity' is not there so much, ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: DEAD FAMOUS:JOJO
How you could muster enough cheek to insult such a great personality, I'll never know. I remember how I dreaded those days in the assembly when I was having soiled ...
Dec 10, 2005 -
Re: Amusement
:D :) :o :lol: Amusing incidents are as commonplace and abundant as houseflies. One does not have to go to the depths of the inside of the Earth to find ...
Dec 10, 2005
