Jojo

Another great limerick. But what's with the 'butt'? Was it a :oops: , or was it a deliberate mistake :lol: ?

Whew! The guardian of all oinking beings in a rare attempt to write serious. Maybe you should warn readers in the topic that it's serious. Otherwise people may come in ...

Tis good! But I guess I'm only saying that because I have a bagful of points, though nmy bag's not so bulky as Snoink and Duskglimmer etc. The even newer ...

Woooooooh!! That was something!!! Why doesn't this have a R rating?

Eclipse

4/10 because the avatar doesn't look like an absentminded genius as the tag below it suggests.

To help non-Indians, rupees is of course the currency of India with $1 being equal to Rs.45. And Big Bazaar is a huge departmental store in the heart of Kolkata, ...

Scanning the edibles in massive ' Big Bazaar', I stumbled acroos a most delightful unedible. It was a wallet, looking healthy but lying on the floor untended. At first I ...

Thought I would point out some mistakes. [quote] saw a man in his forties with a black beared[quote] [quote]punched himin the gut.[/quote] In the beginning, it was exciting but there ...

Like you said, sort of cuts up in the end. The first line grabs me. Then again, when the author is [b]you [/b]one expects something even better than this.

It is an exciting read. I have to agree with xanthan gum though. It seems like the first line came to ur mind and you decided to write a poem. ...

4/10 because I didn't AWWWWW

Since you finished this, why don't you try finishing 'Asher' too. I hate it when the fate of so many people are left hanging in the balance.

Yo richo! :hearts_eyes: I remember the time I received 200 points absolutely from nowhere...from you. I had about a 300 points then and felt those were God-sent. For money, I ...

Your avatar shows the dreamy mood which is conveyed through this poem. And I din't kno girls had troubles getting 'him's. :lol: