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  • Other Poetry Re: Give You A Grammy

    With tunes, this song itself is good enough to win a Grammy. It sounds like a song with good lyrics. Unfortunately, the tune's not there. You could try setting a ...

    Nov 30, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: MY BEST PRE-TEENAGE SHORT STORY(Rated for a strange reason)

    Don't forget, this is grammar of a 10-year old. But I agree, grammar's a bit of a letdowner.(What I said just now was bad grammar, wasn't it?) See, I didn't ...

    Nov 30, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: MY BEST PRE-TEENAGE SHORT STORY(Rated for a strange reason)

    23 children......... Is that normal?????

    Nov 27, 2005
  • Other Re: Love -a writing exercise-

    I want to know whether the buffalo has budged? Maybe you didn't even try to be good, but tell you what, it still is. Blocks come to me as well ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Why me?

    You've not said the most important thing, do you have MONEY? If you have that, then it's enough to make everyone forget all your normalities. In ten minutes, that should ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Other Re: This isn't a proper piece, I know. But maybe you'll like it.

    ************************************************************ right! You could have carried on for eternity and I would have still read it. The ramblings are hilarious. You have indeed taken the joke t

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Research Archives Re: Calling Englishmen

    I would like to write something on the English countryside but am really confused. Jerome.K.Jerome's Three Men on a Boat has left me quite puzzled about the rivers of England. ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: Still living in the Ancient times...

    Wow!! It looked like I had writen it, even though it sounded a world better. The thoughts are so like mine. Random walks, History... You must be my double. :lol: ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: MY BEST PRE-TEENAGE SHORT STORY(Rated for a strange reason)

    So, it was on the event of the birth of my twenty-third younger brother that the twenty-two of us were divided into eleven groups, two of us in each. The ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • General Articles Re: Life's Meaning - Prize Winning Story

    Well, it's pretty obvious why the prize was won by who won it. The essay, if I may call it that, has a very classical touch to it. Even D.H.Lawrence ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: A story written when I was ten- WARNING FANFIC

    I did not mean to say it was bad. I think it has plenty of scope to be a good one but some editing and re-writing has to be done. ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: A story written when I was ten- WARNING FANFIC

    Flowing story, right. But it is too action-packed for too long.

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Horses- Beautiful and Terrible

    My uncle is a decent fellow, until it comes to horse racing. He devotes his life and money to the sport and the local derbies are his destination every once ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Like a Good Girlfriend

    The mindset of perhaps an impossibly good girlfriend perfectly and clearly put. But, I sit here and do nothing About any and everything Don't you think this could be a ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Media Reviews Re: The Lord of the Rings/Tolkien's Written Works/His Myth

    Sorry, guys, for mispelling Sil...what was that again? That is another aspect of Tolkien. The names are so rythmical and also enchanting. Do you think we could start another LOTR ...

    Nov 23, 2005


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