JohnLocke1

I don't know if you saw the message I posted on your profile, but please look! I'm interested in working together, my friend.

The passe compose is used with actions that have already happened. For example: Hier soir, j'ai fait les devoirs. Or, last night, I did my homework. The imparfait is more ...

You're welcome, my friend. I hope you'll tell me when the first few chapters are written!

A suggestion. I would not have Alain, fantastic name, kill Elizabeth. Instead, have part of the focus of the novel be on the psychological torture that Alain forces Elizabeth to ...

Like, if your character usually uses very concise, clear wording, uses their hands minimally, and maintains eye contact, and is one day stuttering and fumbling for words, and using their ...

If you are going to create a universe where the South wins the Civil War, I would be particular about how exactly they defeated the North. Do not gloss over ...

I tend to avoid allowing my characters to speak of their emotions. For some reason, it seems unnatural. As well, if they are going to speak of their emotions, it ...

Maybe not mimic real life dialogue, but characters don't simply walk around saying what they feel. It can reflect what they feel, certainly. But I think that the bulk of ...

I usually don't convey emotion in dialogue. Because, as humans, we rarely use our language to show deep emotion. It is usually internal.

With all writers, I would assume, we come by each form of inspiration at least once. However, I have found that my greatest ideas are often fleeting. A name that ...

I think any idea can be fantastic. It seems as though you have thought it it through, so all that is left is to right it! I say go for ...

Personally, the first one seems a bit overused and cliche. However, the second one seems different and creative. I would run with it, my friend! :)

I had the same problem until very recently, my friend. I would sit down to write and the passion simply would not appear. It frustrated me, angered me, and caused ...