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@defiantAuthoress , your review is complete! I do not read fan-fiction, so this was an interesting review for me. Thank you for sharing that, my friend.

@Ravenboy , your review is complete! Great story, my friend.

I think any idea can be fantastic. It seems as though you have thought it it through, so all that is left is to right it! I say go for ...

In my humble opinion, characters are the plot. Therefore, they are going to need to be strong. How characters interact with one another and deal with one another is a ...

Your review is up, my friend! I can see that we both have a love of magicians...

Personally, the first one seems a bit overused and cliche. However, the second one seems different and creative. I would run with it, my friend! :)

Writing about passion always gives me great joy. Not just love, but all forms of passion.

Your review is complete, my friend! Really, a great piece.

Welcome, my friend! You'll find that this place is filled with people who love to write. I hope to read some of your writing soon :)

Welcome to YWS, my friend! This website is fantastic. I hope you enjoy your time here. Happy Writing!

From this day on, I shall review diligently and with great honor until I am accepted as a Knight of the Green Room!

Welcome to YWS, my friend! I know you will enjoy your time here. Happy Writing!

I had the same problem until very recently, my friend. I would sit down to write and the passion simply would not appear. It frustrated me, angered me, and caused ...

I have your review finished! Nice story, my friend. And I do love your avatar. As I love Avatar.

Thank you so much, my friend! I often fall into the pattern of overused words, so this is a godsend.