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Re: Chapter One: Untitled Story
Amazing. This story is great. I love the detail and the magical part of it all. I can visualize it very well and thats always something that you want for ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: A Desperate Situation
I like it. I like it a lot. The detail was just between to much and not enough and the psychotic killer made the story so much more interesting. His ...
Jun 20, 2015 -
Re: (not sure yet)
This story is so imaginative! I love it so far. I can't believe that I could be so intrigued by only about a page or two. Of course there are ...
Jun 20, 2015 -
Re: Am I imagining it?
This short story is pretty good. I like the beginning. Lots of people can relate to how she felt. My only suggestion is this, there are moments where the story ...
Jun 20, 2015