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Re: The Awakening of the Lord
Hm... Its good but feels like it was kind of long. The imagery was great, and I haven't read a story like this in a while.
Jan 3, 2006 -
Re: "Four to Stand" - Chapter One
Very nicely done! The sarcasm seemed kind of unnatural. I love some of the details you put in, like Ness' hair, and the history behind it. You have a good ...
Jan 3, 2006 -
Re: A Trip to Here (school short story)
Thanks, I really didn't think about it much. It was just sort of a short little thing I wrote down real quick. I have other, much deeper stuff that I ...
Dec 31, 2005 -
Re: A Trip to Here (school short story)
I did!
Dec 23, 2005 -
Re: A Trip to Here (school short story)
I did!
Dec 23, 2005 -
Re: A Trip to Here (school short story)
I did!
Dec 23, 2005 -
Re: A Trip to Here (school short story)
Aw, crap! My spacing didn't work! How come? I used the "pre" thing! Please Review!
Dec 22, 2005