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Re: My photography...
I love the second and fourth pictures. The second has a really nice mood to it, and your face is so gorgeous! The flowers in the fourth one are nice, ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Rate the USER above you!
Username: 70% Custom Title: 60% (Vampires... o_o) Avatar: 95% (Very pretty. Also, paleness+red lips= yay! :D) Country: 85% (Ooh.... Can I come visit?) Signature: 85% (Cabassi) Overall Score: 79% :D
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Currently reading Jane Eyre! Apparently it was on Masterpiece Theatre the other night and I missed it. *pouts*
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: 273rd Squadron Chapter 1 Revised
Welcome, NightsDreamer! *does the New Member Welcome Jig* Very nice to meet you! This piece was interesting. The plot sounds intriguing-- all this war mixed with romance and whatnot. Now ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: Heiress [Chapter One]
Hullo, Sydstix! Ah, a historical touch, I see? Wonderful! A few comments: While it feels like you're setting us up for a neat story, that was about all that we ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: Feeling Real
Adam! Thank you very much for the crit. I need all the help I can get. It's interesting to hear your comments on the mood of it, since I hadn't ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: The YWS Yearbook '07
Well I could post a long, drawn out love not to everyone on here, but I'll keep it short and sweet. You guys are all wonderful, and I'll never remember ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
^ She's adorable! Me with curly hair. I adore curls. I'm a mother! Haha, actually this is a picture of me with my Wellness project Charlie. You know, one of ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: D is for Diphtheria
Very nice, Sam. I quite enjoyed the description of the woman at the Dairy Queen. I could picture her quite vividly. You painted a wonderful picture. I both pity and ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Winter
Inspired by a cold, dreary afternoon that was somehow still beautiful to me. Critique and advise, please! Hugs will be awarded! :D --- How wonderful is it to realize That ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Feeling Real
This is one of my few poems. Please critique harshly and offer any advice you have, because the only thing I know about poetry is that things I have written ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Azaleas for Susie
Oh Lord, Ari! That was wonderful. Really, well done. Beautiful story, beautifully written. Toward the end I actually started to cry! You were curious, charming, adorable, delightful. In short, complet
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: Hey there! ^-^
Hey, White Poem. Welcome, welcome. Yes, YWS is uber-fun and a very friendly community. If there's anything you need to know, just PM me. Also, feel free to notify me ...
Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: Queen Human
Not much constructive criticism or anything, but I really did enjoy this. Very well written, and as Billy said, it made me think. I'll be ready to see some more ...
Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: Fall of the Dragon
Ooh, Jiggity! I am very excited to read the next part of this. Very nice, very nice. It kept my interest and flowed quite well. The characters are varied and ...
Dec 27, 2007
