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Yay! Aw, how adorable she is and will be! Congrats!

Granted, but while conversing with an attractive French boy, you have an accident involving a cognate that gets you yelled at. I wish I were taller.

Yay, Alice! This was very nice. Although, I only wish I could hear it. :wink: Because you gave it your best go Even though it doesn’t show I think that ...

Hey, nickelodeon! Long time no see. This was an excellent start, albeit a short one. The imagery you used to describe the storm was great. Very few things to critique ...

Hey, Bethany, and welcome to YWS. Hope you like it here. So, this was an interesting piece. Foreign exchange student, eh? That opens up a lot of opportunities for fun ...

Hola, Jabber! I really liked this. It had a creepy-cool, ominous feeling. Also, I could picture everything quite clearly. It was like I was seeing it through the eyes of ...

Obviously. What are the only two ways to answer a yes or no question?

I agree that this is a good idea. Also, you tend to meet people a lot faster by critiquing their work and sharing your own with them! Being a part ...

Hey, Insomnia! Very cool, gruesome piece, and a nice change from some of the other stuff I've been reading lately. [quote="Insomnia]“Big day again?” “What do you think?” he asked, massaging ...

Firestarter, is Pratchett good? I've heard he is. Now reading both Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë and Searching for God Knows What by Donald Miller. Yay for classic literature and ...

Interesting second chapter, Sydstix! Now we get to see a little conflict begin. :) OVERALL As far as content goes, this had a lot more "action" than the first chapter, ...

Sounds like fun! If I can figure out all this complex technelology. XD I already know what poem I want to share.

Hey, Reakeda! This was great. I loved the mystery of it all. Also, this had a nice pace and you avoided infodumping! *applauds* Now, onto my critique. Three simple words, ...

CHAPTER 2: Overall, very enjoyable! Sukie felt very moody and teenaged, but not so angsty that she made me want to strangle her. She felt very well developed. Also, the ...

Sam, I really enjoyed this. Your style is wonderful, and your words exact. This is great because it creates a clear picture. When I read the interaction between Carl and ...