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Re: The Park
Yay! Snoinkage! Hehe. I appreciate you critting this. I made some changes {I hope they're better 8\}. And also, thanks for your comment about the last line. It's my favorite ...
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Re: Whats your favourite book?
Oh... let's see: To Kill A Mockingbird by Harper Lee It's a shame he only wrote one novel. Blue Like Jazz by Donald Miller Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbuy and ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read
1) The Yearling by Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings It went on forever... and I didn't get anything out of it. (school reading) 2) Artemis Fowl by Eoin Colfer Ick. 3) The ...
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Re: The New World
Hi everybody! This is basically about my first day in a real school. See, I was homeschooled Pre-K through 7th. 8th grade was my first taste of "real school". And ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Song of the Secret Keepers
The "lady" is fantastic. Beautifully done. The mouse-lizards and bird-things are also very cool. Any coloring? Maybe? Possibly? ... please?
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
6/10 Very true. (You guys may not like mine much. It's kind of inside-jokish, but true.)
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Flying
Okay, this is my first attempt at poetry, so please be gentle with me. I'm definitely open to lots of critiquing, since I know... basically nothing about writing poems. Okay... ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: English vs. American
I feel stupid now, realizing that I've probably corrected some poor person's spelling when it was fine to begin with. Meh... sorry, whoever-that-was!
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Cleanly enough.~ Kyra Organization is top priority. But I do sometimes let it slide. ~ Eli Phst. Sometimes? ~ Akita What would your dream house look like?
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: I'm here, I'm wierd
Hi, welcome, and halo! I read some of your stuff, and I'm sooo jealous. XD Welcome to YWS. Most of us don't bite.
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Song of Shallow Waters I: The Sirens
Lynlyn, I love cookies! How did you know?! *huggles* I also have Merriam-Webster in my favorites. Hehe :mrgreen:
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Pianist
Okay, I don't really like this, but I thought I would put it up anyway. Please critique it, and tell me if you think it's any good. ____ The music ...
Jul 12, 2007 -
Re: Song of Shallow Waters I: The Sirens
Lynlyn! Second chapter was great! Also, I could not find ANY typos on my own. After running it through Word Processor, I found only one error: “Last time we were ...
Jul 12, 2007 -
Re: The Destroyer (Ch. 1)
Hello, Midnightwolf! Nice story. I looooove reading science fiction. The beginning seemed good, a little short maybe, so I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Some things I found: Markos ...
Jul 12, 2007 -
Re: The Park
Yay! Thank you for your comments, Lynlyn. Muahaha... I critted your stuff too!
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