Joeducktape

Banned for being uncreative! >:U

As with most things I write, this came from almost nowhere, and was written in about five minutes. Give me any suggestions you can! --- She invites me to her. ...

Hi, Lizzy! You said this came from a creative writing assignment, right? Out of curiosity, what was the assignment? It might give me a better idea of what your goal ...

Hi, everyone. I have a bit of a dilemma. I want to tell a story from two characters' points of view, but I also like the effect of first person. ...

Sureal, I see your point. Free indirect is a good way of meshing the two. But including swears? I think this can be done, but only in a few exceptional ...

Tarin. ~Everybody What's black and white and read/red all over?

There was a plate of sweets. I just wanted one. Until I had it. Then I wanted the other six. *rubs stomach* ~Adolye Glad you liked them. I went through ...

Hola! As said above, this was very nice. Kind of oddball, but also fun. My only suggestion would be the removal or reformatting of the introduction. It's impossible to tell ...

DON'T SAY BAD WORDS, CHILDREN. Ahem! In literature, however, I think there's a place for it. And that's internal or external dialogue. Otherwise, it really shouldn't be used, especially in ...

Callie, that was wonderful. Your talent makes me jealous. -_- As for the poll, I picked other. I definitely agree with what bkwrm said about the beauty of poems. Plus, ...

Hey, Callie. Ah, cynical poems. Fun, fun. Cool Things: The "message" of this poem, if you will, is great. I know things like that stir my anger, and this piece ...

Nice, Callie! This was really good. The personification and irony were well used. A couple suggestions: [DISCLAIMER: I'm freakishly nitpicky] And my prize is snatched out from in front of ...

I feel a little less strange after this. I often sit in front of a mirror and look at my facial expressions when trying to describe someone. As someone else ...

Murder? *quickly leaves* ~Adolye Murder?! *salivates ~Tarin Tarin loves a good bedtime story. ~Eli And Eli loves to curl up with a good book and his coffee. ~Tarin Me too! ...

It's shiny, there's a distraction, and I'm bored. Or hungry. Which is most of the time. ~Tarin Only if they stole it from me first. ~Eyes Never. Not even in ...