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  • WRFF Archive Re: Novel Reviews (temporarily closed)

    Confetti, sorry it took so long for me to respond to your message. Thank you so much for reviewing my novel! Yes, I don't mind nitpicks, as they can be ...

    Feb 8, 2012
  • WRFF Archive Re: Novel Reviews (temporarily closed)

    Hi, Confetti, how are you doing? Just wanted to know how things are going with my novel? If you don't have the time to review it all, I understand. If ...

    Feb 3, 2012
  • WRFF Archive Re: Lauren's One Stop Critique Shop

    Good Eventide, Lauren! It's Jitterbug. Whenever you get some free time, I was wondering if you'd be willing to give a review on the first part of my fantasy novel, ...

    Feb 2, 2012
  • Novel Workshop Re: Eventide: Part One

    Good eventide to you, Lauren! I finished reading all thirteen chapters, and man, you put this story together like a pro! The pieces of your plot were connected to form ...

    Jan 26, 2012
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Pathway - chapter 2

    Chapter 2 Ichabad spread his wings wide and glided over the vast ocean, the salty wind smothering his body like balm to a wound. It seemed as if an eternity ...

    Jan 15, 2012
  • Novel Workshop Re: Eventide: Part One

    Hey, this is Jitterbug. I'll start to read this tomorrow. Might take me a week or more to finish it, as I have a very demanding work schedule. But I'll ...

    Jan 14, 2012
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Pathway - Prologue

    Prologue Ichabad descended the dark, humid stairway, the bat infested ceiling of the tunnel rising several hundred feet above him. He traversed the subterranean stairs without way of illumination, but

    Jan 13, 2012
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Pathway Chapter 1

    All who read this, please don't hold back on your opinions. I'll be posting the entire novel soon, so consider this a preview. Chapter 1 West Ireland, 10:48 P.M. David ...

    Jan 11, 2012
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Forgotten (working title)

    Redbird, your novel is fantastic! And I’m not just talking about the plot, either. Your writing is nearly flawless. Your prose is clear and crisp, and instead of being overly ...

    Jan 11, 2012
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Silhouettes - Chapter 1

    Seshat, your premise is interesting. I’m curious to know where these creatures known as Silhouettes come from, what their intentions are, and, namely, why they’re targeting the main protagonist. W

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: The Great Test of Faith -- Chapter Two

    RachelJY, I really enjoyed your second chapter. It’s filled with Scriptural accuracy; yet, with your charming imagination, you bring the events to life in a real, personable way. We see ...

    Jan 4, 2012
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: The Great Test of Faith -- Chapter One

    RachelJY, your opening narrative was powerful! It was written with the depth and authority that we see in the actual Scriptures. And it relates perfectly, in a gripping, soul-stirring way, ...

    Jan 4, 2012
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: A Taint of Red(2).Chapter One

    Forestqueen, having read your entire novel – not sure if you saw the review I posted – I think your alternate first chapter isn’t a bad idea. It tells of ...

    Jan 2, 2012
  • Novel Workshop Re: A Taint of Red (Draft 2)

    Forestqueen, your novel was absolutely inspiring! I had not been so deeply moved by a story in a long time. It's a classic story of forbidden love, only it's told ...

    Dec 30, 2011


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