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Re: Novel Reviews (temporarily closed)
Confetti, sorry it took so long for me to respond to your message. Thank you so much for reviewing my novel! Yes, I don't mind nitpicks, as they can be ...
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: Novel Reviews (temporarily closed)
Hi, Confetti, how are you doing? Just wanted to know how things are going with my novel? If you don't have the time to review it all, I understand. If ...
Feb 3, 2012 -
Re: Lauren's One Stop Critique Shop
Good Eventide, Lauren! It's Jitterbug. Whenever you get some free time, I was wondering if you'd be willing to give a review on the first part of my fantasy novel, ...
Feb 2, 2012 -
Re: Eventide: Part One
Good eventide to you, Lauren! I finished reading all thirteen chapters, and man, you put this story together like a pro! The pieces of your plot were connected to form ...
Jan 26, 2012 -
Re: Pathway - chapter 2
Chapter 2 Ichabad spread his wings wide and glided over the vast ocean, the salty wind smothering his body like balm to a wound. It seemed as if an eternity ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: Eventide: Part One
Hey, this is Jitterbug. I'll start to read this tomorrow. Might take me a week or more to finish it, as I have a very demanding work schedule. But I'll ...
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: Pathway - Prologue
Prologue Ichabad descended the dark, humid stairway, the bat infested ceiling of the tunnel rising several hundred feet above him. He traversed the subterranean stairs without way of illumination, but
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Pathway Chapter 1
All who read this, please don't hold back on your opinions. I'll be posting the entire novel soon, so consider this a preview. Chapter 1 West Ireland, 10:48 P.M. David ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: The Forgotten (working title)
Redbird, your novel is fantastic! And I’m not just talking about the plot, either. Your writing is nearly flawless. Your prose is clear and crisp, and instead of being overly ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: Silhouettes - Chapter 1
Seshat, your premise is interesting. I’m curious to know where these creatures known as Silhouettes come from, what their intentions are, and, namely, why they’re targeting the main protagonist. W
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: The Great Test of Faith -- Chapter Two
RachelJY, I really enjoyed your second chapter. It’s filled with Scriptural accuracy; yet, with your charming imagination, you bring the events to life in a real, personable way. We see ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: The Great Test of Faith -- Chapter One
RachelJY, your opening narrative was powerful! It was written with the depth and authority that we see in the actual Scriptures. And it relates perfectly, in a gripping, soul-stirring way, ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: A Taint of Red(2).Chapter One
Forestqueen, having read your entire novel – not sure if you saw the review I posted – I think your alternate first chapter isn’t a bad idea. It tells of ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: A Taint of Red (Draft 2)
Forestqueen, your novel was absolutely inspiring! I had not been so deeply moved by a story in a long time. It's a classic story of forbidden love, only it's told ...
Dec 30, 2011
