Jishbee

Daily I have passed it by and by, And my thoughts question it, “Why, oh why?” A dashed line which divides the road Imparts drivers to stick to a code. ...

Pretty good poem! A few notes on the grammar and verse in general: You're words can't touch me Your fist can't budge me I'm finally coming clean. Change "You're" in ...

Hey, Elena! Interesting poem, it reminds me of something I once read by Margaret Atwood. One thing I would do is add more imagery. Try words with many meanings so ...