JimmyTheMighty

This is fascinating, I love how snappy it is, and how effective! I'm sorry I don't have much to add, probably just that starting every sentence with 'is it' gets ...

Lisa hates herself and she hates her body. She really hates her mother for making her go to another one of her stupid parties but she utterly despises The Dress. ...

I absolutely love this poem, the 'I' thing is fantastic and really helps tie the poem together. I love your choices of things to say, they are so abstract but ...