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It was? Well, there you go. I try to stay away from Dan Brown, so no I haven't read his books. XD At least it wasn't completely stolen, haha, there ...

Heya, thanks for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Cheers

Ah! Will I never escape the video game stigma? Hopefully, considering this is the first time its ever been applied to me, so I should have time, haha. Only got ...

Another aussie-alien! Ha! Our forces on YWS are growing and soon we shall dominate the world! ... I mean, uh... Sup? I'm totally not trying to recruit you into my ...

He was naked, and cold sweat clung to him, the bed was uncomfortable and there were no blankets. You need to learn to where and when to place commas as ...

Sometimes it’s hard to credit what your own eyes are showing you. Even, as now, when I knew I was dreaming. There was a dragon; a real live, breathing dragon ...

"Destinations set, goals achieved, candle-lights snuffed - periodic darkness. Thoughts drift, distance grows, problems multiply but even in the darkness, in the twilight, the work continues." Destinat

So the consensus is to get rid of them? Hm. If I stick with the Rome as the city-narrator, then I might keep them up until it all ties in ...

Ha! Ye gods, but you're quick, with the response. I like that about you. I freely admit to not being proficient within the first person style - this is, I ...

Oh! And I've been so glad to see my absentee foe, dancing about once more with Impish grace. What to say on the italics? I'm not really sure about them ...

Everything I write, I write with the intention that it be read . The who, where and why don't really matter, but for what it's worth, yes I want the ...

[to be revised]

Hey, Angel! I am feeling good, now that semester is over and my stress has been lifted a bit, so thank you very much for reading and critiquing! I intend ...

Imp! Whoa. I must say, I was all set to call the mental institute and warn them you'd finally tripped over the edge [mind that line, preciously precocious, precociously precious ...

The stars glared down. It was no wonder. I didn’t know them nor they me; those familiar pin points of light that I had ignored my whole life were now ...