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Lollllllll@Sureal I love the 'I'm going to kill you all, I'm so serious' look you've got going there. That's a long ass sentence to express facially! My congratulations.

It was, I thought - until only a few months ago - the best fantasy series ever written. It's vaster in scope than any that came before it (bar one) ...

Me? Creepy? Never! :roll:

All I know is...Snoink's purty. :shock: p.s I'm totally not deflecting any undue attention on me via flattery. I don't sound like a girl. Scout's honour. What's that? I never ...

Angel of Death! She makes me feel thpethial. :oops: Always reads me stuff. Tis grand.

I'm becoming a serial offender. I would move this chapter to 4th, and bring the 4th forward. It makes sense that after this chapter, Haart feels the need to bring ...

Nania! Lol. Love it. * Okay, so remember what I said in the last chapter? About difference? Those small details, I mentioned - whether the grass is an absurd shade ...

The poor lighting gave the vehicle a gloomy feeling, one that Leo didn’t necessarily agree with. This sentence tripped me, then stepped on my face repeatedly. XD I don't even ...

Hola! No, this isn't the novel I mentioned before - its for an science fiction anthology, but I'm fairly sure it's not going to stay under the word limit, despite ...

Haha, nifty indeed. Thanks for the comment!

Oy! I am 100,000,000,000,000,000% in the same boat as you. I'm writing a novel at the moment simply to prove I can finish one. Only difference between you and I ...

Bahaha, that's awesome

I agree with some of Blink's suggestions, have only this to add: she hoped he would chock on an apology one day. choke * So, the whole Adam and Eve ...

and [s]a[/s] several other soldiers were jogging over towards him So, I haven't many thoughts regarding this to be honest - which is a feat, in itself, given the many ...

I shall try. Thanks very much for continuing with this, Cheers