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Re: Dragon Ball
It looks shocking, like, seriously bad. Goku is white! AND PICCOLO ISN'T EVEN GREEN! Fox is going to burn in a very special kind of hell.
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: StoweAway [one]
Clair Stowe mulled over it frequently in the later years to come Why? I mean, why put this random authorial omniscience here? It's out of place, halts the flow and ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Names and Other Dangerous Things: A beginning.
Oh noes! Skonk became Snonk! I mean, in the last line anyway. You should fix that typo. Is someone subconsciously channeling/thinking about Snoink? XD I felt this was forced. The ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Question about fantasy cliches.
Dwarves living in mountains and being good miners. I mean, it seems fitting with their general appearance. If that is alright, what are something things I shouldn't do with my ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Jonathon Strange and Mr. Norrel
This book, by Susanna Clarke, has long been hailed by critics and writers alike as a fantasy classic. I've always ignored it, however, but I don't know why - perhaps ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: I'm writing again - woot!
Ha, I was just going to ask if you had seen the show, 'John Adams' - the very first episodes of which, deal with the Boston Massacre. Great stuff. Luck ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Harold's Home
Yay! Critique! *jiggles* Good question about the title, I'm not really sure, I think its very much about his home. The one he keeps visiting in his mind, the one ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Them Blinking Critiques
Only because you never crit my stuff and my sinister feelings have been hurt by this.
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
Lol, no! I was kidding! Snoink is a very good critiquer :p Even when she's being molested by Maths XD. Besides you shouldnt listen to me, I jiggle in unwholesomely ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Jared's Critique Lounge
Hey. Wrote something that might be up your alley. Check it out, if you like.
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: The Critique... Click?
Icaruss selling his soul, so cheaply? I'm so disillusioned, man. XD I wrote something the other day. I was half-delirious at the time, honestly, it was 2am but I wasn't ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
Sweet lord, people are actually applying to be slaughtered? Why not just go up to a serial killer and say "Sir, if you could do me next, that would be ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: What In The Jiminy Cricket Is Twilight?
The movie took in $70 million at the US Box Office. I tell you, I am getting tired of the pre-teen and teen girls of America! First you unleashed High ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Harold's Home
The darkness closed in, surrounding him with velvet arms. At first, it had been strange and unfriendly; covering the house with covetous arms and distrustful eyes. Harold had been a ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
And I'm the creepy one? *cough* XD
Nov 24, 2008
