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  • Other Poetry Re: Shaman's Blues

    Who is willing to give a fatherly role, on a walk to the beauty way. Chanting and bluffing towards our own sunset A paradise of a modern struggle This stanza ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The New Leaf

    amidst the daze the life was born I think that should be "a" life. I found the repetition of phrase and the formulaic structure to be unimaginative and boring. This ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Holdin' it down

    Hm. It seems to me as though there is a story here, but its one I mostly missed. It takes a place in a school; there is a progression of ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Question on Immortality and Myths about it.

    I've read so many different books and accounts on immortality; really, if you don't want to do reuse, recycle or in any be influenced by previously used notions, seems to ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Length of chapters

    Well, as you said, it depends on the type of book, the genre, and the purpose of the chapter. By which I mean, do you merely intend to introduce the ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Superlative! *dances*

    ACT's? Er, what?

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: The Official Pure Awesomness Award

    Come now, Snoinkledoinkle - you know you love it XD. You embody epic win :wink

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Silvery Whispers - Part Two

    The nun worked the simple latch and [s]then[/s] swung the gate open on rusty hinges [s]that screamed into the relative silence of the night. [/s] I let you get away ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: The Magician's Guild, The Novice, The High Lord

    Haha, discrimination! There are plenty of major Australian fantasy writers though: Ian Irvine Trudi Canavan Kim Wilkins Tad Williams Garth Nix Sara Douglass Fiona McIntosh Kate Forsyth Tony Shillitoe

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: The Magician's Guild, The Novice, The High Lord

    It's a very good series and I believe she is writing a prequel, as regards the war that kept getting referenced throughout the novels. Her second series, the Circle of ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Silvery Whispers - Part One

    Hola, Inky! The Curse of the Verbose The moon peeked her head through [s]a break in[/s] the thick ominous clouds to shine [s]her silver light[/s] over the forested land below ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Sky's on Fire

    Momma’s out in[s]to[/s] the garden with Jackson watchi' the sky out in the garden with Jackson, watchin' the sky. As far as dialects go, I've always known the words to ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Modern Day Twist ~ One

    The swift smell of Forget-Me-Not flowers rose my senses in a pleasant way Eh? How can a smell be swift? And I think you meant 'rose to my senses' - ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Coffee and Breathmints

    Oh,I could set my watch by it. space after the comma Didn't we have a box of cookies?Or did I eat them all?" another space P.S. We're dying. Who is ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: I Want

    “I want to be a genius.” The boy dropped his small red truck onto the floor. I suggest you put a space between the two. As it is, it suggests ...

    Dec 6, 2008


Forgiveness is the fragrance that the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it.
— Mark Twain