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Re: Shaman's Blues
Who is willing to give a fatherly role, on a walk to the beauty way. Chanting and bluffing towards our own sunset A paradise of a modern struggle This stanza ...
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Re: The New Leaf
amidst the daze the life was born I think that should be "a" life. I found the repetition of phrase and the formulaic structure to be unimaginative and boring. This ...
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Re: Holdin' it down
Hm. It seems to me as though there is a story here, but its one I mostly missed. It takes a place in a school; there is a progression of ...
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Re: Question on Immortality and Myths about it.
I've read so many different books and accounts on immortality; really, if you don't want to do reuse, recycle or in any be influenced by previously used notions, seems to ...
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Re: Length of chapters
Well, as you said, it depends on the type of book, the genre, and the purpose of the chapter. By which I mean, do you merely intend to introduce the ...
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Re: Superlative! *dances*
ACT's? Er, what?
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Re: The Official Pure Awesomness Award
Come now, Snoinkledoinkle - you know you love it XD. You embody epic win :wink
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Re: Silvery Whispers - Part Two
The nun worked the simple latch and [s]then[/s] swung the gate open on rusty hinges [s]that screamed into the relative silence of the night. [/s] I let you get away ...
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Re: The Magician's Guild, The Novice, The High Lord
Haha, discrimination! There are plenty of major Australian fantasy writers though: Ian Irvine Trudi Canavan Kim Wilkins Tad Williams Garth Nix Sara Douglass Fiona McIntosh Kate Forsyth Tony Shillitoe
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Re: The Magician's Guild, The Novice, The High Lord
It's a very good series and I believe she is writing a prequel, as regards the war that kept getting referenced throughout the novels. Her second series, the Circle of ...
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Re: Silvery Whispers - Part One
Hola, Inky! The Curse of the Verbose The moon peeked her head through [s]a break in[/s] the thick ominous clouds to shine [s]her silver light[/s] over the forested land below ...
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Re: The Sky's on Fire
Momma’s out in[s]to[/s] the garden with Jackson watchi' the sky out in the garden with Jackson, watchin' the sky. As far as dialects go, I've always known the words to ...
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Re: A Modern Day Twist ~ One
The swift smell of Forget-Me-Not flowers rose my senses in a pleasant way Eh? How can a smell be swift? And I think you meant 'rose to my senses' - ...
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Re: Coffee and Breathmints
Oh,I could set my watch by it. space after the comma Didn't we have a box of cookies?Or did I eat them all?" another space P.S. We're dying. Who is ...
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Re: I Want
“I want to be a genius.” The boy dropped his small red truck onto the floor. I suggest you put a space between the two. As it is, it suggests ...
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