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To Whom It May Concern, You know all those points we get for posting and the constant reminders to boost the economy? Ever wondered how the economy was doing? I ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. Just so you know, its a requirement for you to critique two pieces per every one you post. This was well written, if short and ultimately ...

Actually, he's probably starving so that's a realistic reaction. Go search for the kitchen and pig out. lol

Ah, that's an interesting point actually. I'm not sure what the official stance is on that, but I think its okay. I've read books in which there were a variety ...

And you cheated! You gave yourself 5 million! XD

The good parts? It's astonishingly well written and in general, is a fantastic book. Considering when it was written,the power of the story is really amazing. Don't head into it ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS. Just so you know, you are required to do two reviews for every one of your posts. [sorrowful pain] How can pain be sorrowful? Left ...

Hola! I'll say from the outset that I didn't like the italicised parts. Mostly, I think its a great technique, but mostly misused here. The repetition gets really annoying. Run, ...

1) When did you join YWS? 18th of November, 2005. Three solid years ago. 2) Did you try out any other writing sites before you joined YWS? No, this was ...

Haha, I remember the time before the JM's, before the Instructors and Greeters. I believe it began with the V.I.P's, a group I almost became a part of before it ...

For one thing, I think you should remove all the periods and commas from this piece. In some poems, it works, here, it halts the flow. I stepped on an ...

But I pray my blazen words shall haunt I think you mean 'brazen' - blazen isn't a word. But I feel the strings of history pulling in my favor., I ...

Exactly my brand of heroine. Do you mean heroin? As in the drug, or heroine? As in the female hero? I found the repetition of 'Pain is like a drug ...

Haha, good old Anne Rice - I wonder how she writes now that she's all religious? I mean, given that 70% of her other books are basically porn. I'm reading ...

... Seriously? Well, er, welcome to YWS. I think you need some help with this. I just wrote an article that might be of some help - for beginning writers ...