Jiggity

Hey there! I see you're new, so welcome to YWS. Daddy sits at the big round table, looking at pictures of people on the old square computer. His tired eyes ...

Rule the world. Obviously. One YWS point now counts for 50US cents, dontcha know?

Dijon. “This will be a test of your mettle, Chuckles. Let’s just hope you weren’t sloppy.” Dijon turned, smirking. A smirk that very quickly vanished as he saw the man ...

Sometimes, January is a gorgeous young girl with pale skin and jet-black hair. And those piercing [s]crystal-clear[/s] blue eyes that only a select few people possess. Like two orbs of ...

All I could see [s]on my eyelids[/s] was green I think that would make more sense as 'of my eyelids' - even then, though, I suggest nixing the whole eyelid ...

I do. Given that I wrote it in Word :wink: I'm glad this has been of some help. Obviously, this is really basic and there's a whole lot more you ...

Er, is this it? Hm. And you mean to continue it? This is supposed to launch us into your story, your novel? There isn't much here to review really. There ...

Her mouth was thin and silent. is Keep up the tense. Me and Maria close our eyes and try to feel each other's insides – heartbeats and emotions as thick ...

April's head was hurting so bad, like an ax was being driven into her skull, it was almost impossible to think. You don't need to keep repeating her name. Gets ...

Damn him and his legal wrangling! Too good for us. *cries* Ah, well, modern dictatorships always end well. :wink:

Welcome to YWS! You needn't worry. We're all very nice. But we try to be fair. Remember to review two stories for every one you write. It was my fifteenth ...

Yeah, people here rule. Not that we're biased or anything. XD Welcome! Hope you enjoy yourself and learn a bunch, *jiggles*

Yeah, I threw a bit of McCain in there, just for fun, haha. *serious face* But this is a grave issue. We have survived the global meltdown so far; I ...

Reflect reflection reflect, Who do you see there? Reflect reflection reflect, Why do you have such care? This was the only stanza I had a real problem with. I didn't ...

XD, Nice.