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Re: YWS Budget Surplus
Hahaha, just because you've reached a limit. I think you've gone as far as the hierarchy will allow, snoinkusdoinkus - all red stars, writer of legend, moderator, etc. Better slow ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: Uprising Discussion
Indeed. I feel I should mention that the probability of our losing is actually very low, although its starting to get higher with each post lol. We are not facing ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: Messing Up These Mean Streets
Hey, I thought this was really good but as it tells a story more than anything else, it should probably be in Narrative Poetry. For the most part, the rhyming ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: Sunestraka
Heya, Thanks for taking the time to comment. Tis appreciated. I don't know though, whether I'll keep going with this - a new, random version of an older story I've ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: Sunestraka
Buildings loomed out of the darkness, leering grotesquely as I swerved amongst them. Sandals slapping heavily against the cobbles, I ran as fast as I knew how. The sounds of ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Hewo ^_^
Hola! Welcome to YWS Hopefully, you'll have fun here and learn a lot about writing; we're all about friendly improvement. Don't be afraid to tell us more about yourself, we're ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Creep- Chapter 6
The snow was blown around in great clumps, its chill sending the people [s]who had business at Gatekeepers[/s] hurrying through the gold double doors into the building That's a horrid ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Chocolate and Cigarettes
Haha, I didn't check the date on it! It was just sitting here in the forum so I checked it out and well, there were stuff that needed fixin'. Couldn't ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Heartsick - Prologue
Subconsciously, she espies the mark on her back, the worst of them all. I don't think you can subconsciously espy anything, actually. I understand what you mean - she sees ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Who is Pat Bunchana?!!
Pat Buchanan is all. Most of all, Pat Buchanan is not Pat Buchana - (see thread title XD)
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: YWS Budget Surplus
Haha, everyone's getting a bailout! The Instructors definitely deserve it. *nods* And... Dragons ftw
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: I ordered the lit journal today!
lol congrats
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Editing
Er, not really. Posting on YWS seems to do the trick, ha. Usually when I do that, I can see a dozen errors straight away. Don't know why. The best ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Under the Grey Sky
I feel like running" she said, But the weeping water below her words Said more "Follow me" she whispered, Her breath is wet now, And with a desperate bounding run ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: new take on 'Silent night'
As we laugh away Christmas night A girl baths in the napalm light bathes her breath come short her heart goes taut comes short * I don't really know what ...
Dec 10, 2008
