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The man in front of him shared the same facial expression small nitpick but no one ever has the 'same' facial expression. Similar, I think, works better. a deep, damnable ...

Hey Kitty! Thanks so much for the comments, I made some light changes to begin with. Tell me what you think, Cheers

Note, this will be told from a series of character perspectives within the same city, on the same path. Five segments of the one poem. Subtitle is in bold. A ...

I enjoyed this series heaps, but that was a good long time ago now. There's going to be a movie? That's awesome news. The Demonata was pretty damn good too, ...

I added you both! Cos I'm made of win like that. I also posted :p

Dijon Dijon watched the slow, lazy swells of the blue dunes. The ship wallowed without the expert seamanship it had become accustomed to. The sun’s light, all orange gold, played ...

Haha -- Hola, Kylan! It was more an experiment than anything else; I was tinkering with the notion of doing something different with an older piece --- the wands and ...

Lol, I've done 102 reviews this month. Most of them have been fairly longish. I say what needs to be said -- and only if it *needs* to be said. ...

Scratch that. Just saw the last episode of the first season - oh lord the cheese! It was so bad.

3/10 - don't know 'em 1. If I give you my love - Ray Charles 2. Clingwrap - Sam Sparro 3. This Sudden Injury - City and Color 4. [for ...

I'm really beginning to enjoy this. I think you're starting to nail her voice, now. The sun was about to rise, and I obviously couldn’t leave in broad daylight. There ...

7/10 -- for Nickelback, lol. 1. Tire Swing - Kimya Dawson 2. God's Gonna Cut You Down - Johnny Cash 3. Picture Me Rolling - Tupac 4. Mad World - ...

Ah, quick question - Anzius, who in the name of Gargamel were the random woman and child? Where did they come from? What business did they have in that place ...

Keep it friendly, please.

Well there isn't much to work with here, now is there? I suggest you inject some grammar and proper punctuation though; the absence of it does nothing for this piece. ...