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3/10 - recognize two of 'em but don't remember what they sound like, lol. 1. Love Makes You Beautiful -- Terrence Howard 2. Cats In the Cradle - Johnny Cash ...

...such a misleading title... I don't do either, typically. I gave one out this year, but that was it. Just not my thing, xmas...

All Creep knew to do was to deal with this problem in a familiar way. Awkwardly worded. 'Creep only knew one way to deal with a problem" - or something ...

2/10 - props for Nickelback, but nothing else. 1. Kung Fu Fighting - KC And the Sunshine Band 2. The Phrase That Pays - The Academy Is 3. Near Dark ...

Hey, don't think I've seen you around before. Welcome to YWS. I'm going to keep this general, because for the most part, there aren't too many grammatical nitpicks to make ...

*boggles* Oh my. XD Thank you very much! I'm glad this is getting a positive reception. I haven't written poetry in at least a year or two so I was ...

Ah, well to my eyes, those questions are mostly dealt with, in the text. Oddly enough, you're not the only one who has said to me that my works are ...

A radiant light suffused me, lighting the area but even as I became aware of it, it began to fade and die. I clutched frantically at my arms, expecting them ...

Somehow, these seemed to improve with each piece, which is obviously to the good. But it makes me seem shoddy! Leaves me with so little to say. Having said that, ...

Lol, these are short enough to be merged together, you know. Some of them, anyway. This is how she looked as I opened the door [s]to her[/s]: ‘You don’t sound ...

There was only a dozen of us, all told, and the music we played was kept within moderate levels. for some reason, the use of 'was' confounded me here. I ...

Will wait to the end - I'm thinking its a good move at the moment, but the ending could change things, no? Will get back to you on that.

and could still feel residue boredom rattling around inside me No problem with rattling, but I would say 'residual' quite possible in the form of projectile vomit, actually. possibly My ...

For what its worth, I apologise for proving its possible. Don't hate me! *runs away crying*

Hola, Fand of the Locks; Fandilocks; Fandy-fand! They're all good. :wink: So I'm going to be honest with you. I loved this. It was fantastically well written, but I had ...