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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Untitled- 420 Words

    Inky! Aloha. Creeping under the door is a straggling shadow, a keep safe of my memories... I heard nothing at first but as I recovered from a vulnerable sleep, my ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Food for Thought

    Hey there, Prok. Way to use 'then' :P So not going there, ha. It was a curious stroke of irony when my life was worth living only when I was ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Purp vs Blue I

    Go us , rather. XD. Let's make it even sided next time. *cracks knuckles* Then see how well you do.

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Do You Have What It Takes To Join YWS' Most Exclusive Club?

    Lol, I have gone up 135 reviews this month, so you guys can do it in considerably less than a year XD. I'll make it there next year, for sure ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Oh no, I seem to be lost! Or just new.

    Hola, Fem! I'm going to call you fem-bot at some stage. It's inevitable, so lets get that out of the way right from the start, okay, fem-bot? Cool. So, welcome ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Purp vs Blue I

    Psh, please, the greeters would have been totally owned without Suzanne and other non-blue help. Not our fault y'all are a bunch of babies who can't stand on their own ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Gaea - Prologue

    Well, it was certainly intriguing. But vague. vanishing into the hellfire of their own fury you used hellfire only a line before this, try and think of something else. Honestly, ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Breaking the Fourth Wall

    Hm. I quite liked the idea of this piece but I thought the execution was lacking and could have been done better. You repeat 'canon of life' at the end ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Prayer of the Wishes

    What was the point of this? It made no sense and was repetitive in the extreme. Saying the same thing three ways in three lines isn't exactly creative, its annoying ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Crying On Paper

    Hey there, Evanrith. I found this be fairly boring and pointless. The flow was halting at times and poorly managed. I also found the repetition of 'streams' to be my ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bawdy Lover

    Hey, I agree with Nate this was a fun, light read. I don't really have any problems with it honestly, aside from that minor contradiction Nate pointed out. If you’d, ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The New King?

    I have an obsession with King Arthur, lol and any myths/legends regarding him and Merlin. I'm actually writing a contemporary, serious short story on the subject, so this was a ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Where do you read?

    Sunshine! *hisses* It's always really pretty to do so but, in my experience, seriously blinding - reflects off the pages and burns my eyes/face. Although in England, maybe the light ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: New Years Resolutions

    I don't really believe in these; it seems more like 'make an improbable wish day' or something. People rarely keep them. I just want to keep doing what I do ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The New King?

    XD. It had to be under 500 words, June, hence the lack of you know...stuff. I used to write stuff like this a fair bit -- A Funeral of Demons, ...

    Dec 28, 2008


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