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Ooh this is a difficult one. Ive been on the reveiving end of L.B.L's often and I find that they are very helpful, after you get over the disappointment that ...

Got the second highest actually. 14/15. Thanks for taking the time to comment Miss Imp, tis much appreciated. Suggestion noted.

Hey ppl. I wrote this in the Creative Writing section of a previous exam. Now my most important exams are coming up, this friday. Was wondering if I should redo ...

Awww, I really dont have time to complete my task, or indeed any other, which is kinda sad. But this was really really good. Not helpful I know, but still ...

First time I noticed this! Hmm, I doubt I'll be able to review a lot today, but next weekend definetly!! I'll tackle Other Fiction and Fantasy/ or Action.

leeching to the warmth, I just had a quick glance at this, and I immediately noticed this line: it doesnt make sense. Leeching the warmth, is what your going for. ...

On this pretty myspace girl's she has a wall picture of On this pretty girl's myspace she has a wall picture of ... That is all.

Im going to have to disagree with Myth here, I think you've done extremely well. For sure, I didnt expect anything nearly as good as what I just read, it ...

Ecellent, responses! there is no person in this poem Really? No way! Of course there isn't, its about an umbrella. And it is deliberately ambiguous, how boring and dull would ...

An overly taut piece of night, so dark, cool and lovely, flowed above and about my head atop a sliver of bone that shone and glimmered A delicate tracery of ...

I want a Horror Forum as well, twould be cool. I dont know what the Dark Elite is...not sure if I like the name either. Critique pending.

Double spaces between paragraphs and dialogue. Please. I cant stand even looking at--let alone reading--a piece that is not set out properly. Fix it up and I promise to critique ...

You see, its quite obvious that its a female book, a female classic, but did my idiot teacher care about that? NO! Who in their right mind, apart from those ...

Whoa. My family arent really the intellectual type ... or the type that reads ... the books I have, I've bought painstakingly with pocket money over a couple of years. ...

I disagree with Gannon about the early introduction of Zeke, I found nothing wrong with that. It was very well written, I loved it. Well done.