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Lol, DQ's finally seeing some action. So, is YWS fanfiction what we all turn to now, when we need to break writing blocks? If thats the case, then I'm overdue. ...

Awww, I've never actually met any, although I have exchanged emails with Authors, such as Janny Wurts, Trudi Canvan and Kate Forsyth.

Um, just a question: do you write from a woman's point of view? My kiss once sealed the tomb of his empty mouth I've noticed the 'his' in your pieces ...

I approve of this, it being dedicated to David Gemmel and all. It got tiring after a while though, it being enitrely based on a run. It was, however, excellently ...

Im going to that Australian concert! WOO! 6 days!!!

Hurrumph ... took ya long enough! lol, jk. Thanks for the critique WG, um and just so you know, there is no time period. This isnt historical in any way, ...

Grrrr. All Hail the Queen of Hell, Bringer of the Apocalypse, Head Pig Snoinkus!!! ... ... ... Watch out MisterWaffles! I totally just eclipsed your 650. Ha!

Well, I disagree with Claudette. The italicisation made perfect sense, as did the screwing up of the eyes description, which I thought was astute. It fits perfectly, its what everyone ...

[Suggested rewrites are in italics. The water on which the seagull's feathery behind rested on was intensely cold. The water on which the seagull's feathery behind rested, was intensely cold. ...

Well so far its pretty good. I was pleasantly surprised. There's not much I can say on what there is here except that its excellently written considering your age, with ...

I havent yet, but I definetly will. I thought it would be interesting to write in a style thats out of my comfort zone, something I'd never tried before. I ...

Coolies, danke snoinkus. I dont know about cliched high fantasy... although this is certainly a style I'm not used to and have never written in. Maybe I should just rewrite ...

lmao. I put to spite Pat Buchanan. That's just hilarious. I've always wanted to emulate the greats of fantasy and create my own worlds. I would always be frustrated when ...

Post the entire thing. Its impossible to jusdge a story accurately based on an excerpt. It does, however, seem to be well written. Post the rest and we shall see.

Its not emo? What are you blind? Sorry to say, but it is: EMO EMO EMO EMO EMO EMO plus infinity