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I didn't sugercoat it! I told you I was confused and thought it was abstract, and your right when you said we had established the main cause of the confusion, ...

Shut up. What, because you don't like it, I should get rid of it? Whatever. I like it, its my piece, and others do as well. Just because you don't ...

Tsar Nicholas II looked anxiously out the window, at the sleepy, snow-mantled city of St Petersburg. It was perfect; his homeland, his city, and jewel. A thick layer of cloud ...

Sanctions have been imposed; they've finally got their act together and done something. It remains to be seen, however, what N Korea's reaction will be.

Why the rulers of Dirantyr had decided to build the Academe so close to Gypsie territory no one was certain, Awkward sentence. Maybe: No one knew why the rulers of ...

Certainly nothing effective has been done as yet, useless posturing and threats. Do you know what the reaction of the Aus gov was on first hearing of the alleged tests? ...

Let's hope. LOL, I agree with everyone, time and practice=improvement. Which must mean I've gotten next to nowhere, hehe. I havent written much at all since I started last year. ...

Hmmmp, this isnt a question I ask myself. I mean, they just are. It's kind of hard to explain, but I almost unconciously shy away from the stereotype. Most of ...

I think that for your age, this is very good, in the sense that its imaginative and pretty solid in terms of description, if nothing else. As such I wont ...

Cheers all, thanks for takin the time to read and reply.

Excellent. Thank you for the reply, tis appreciated.

I liked this, for the most part. I was a little confused by the jump from Death being a single entity to a plural: Telling me to give it to ...

This is abstract in the extreme. It was so very bizarre, but I took your advise, to ''lineorize'' and look at each sentence as a moment in a dreamscape. At ...

Well I dont know about sanctions now; North Korea has stated that it will regard sanctions as a declaration of war and this eventuality should by all means necessary be ...

I wonder if it'll be noticeable, the change in writer. Good on her, any continuation of Gemmel is awesome. I wish her all the best.