Jiggity

Lama, I thought time was more a circle then a straight line. At least thats what I heard.

Hahaha, thats all well and good. There were 5, last time I checked but suggestion noted. Chapter 1 coming soon; I plan for it to start before the prologue, in ...

Woo!! Awesome crit jack thanks, as I explained, the 'juts' thing is a typo, meant to be 'just'. Hehe, I'll fix that up, very very helpful crit so thank you ...

Why thank you. This particular scene may be reshuffled later, in the sense that it may no longer be the prologue, lol. I dont know yet. But yes, Chapter 1 ...

Twilight City. Prologue. “They call him Shadow Walker. One of the Old Powers humanity never managed to purge from this world, even by the graces of the Source that fuels ...

Stunning rebuttal, that.

Well I'm not talking about Fox, now am I? I'm in Australia, remember!! Our news programs had a different angle. And that was definetly the message the majority got; don't ...

Lmao ^_^ I totally disagree with you Nate. This site is perfect. Let us crucify this fool! ... ... ... ... Haha, funny responses all. In all seriousness though, we ...

I'm hearing a lot of, 'things will calm down now'. But there's an equal possibility that his death will be the catalyst for an intenisified surge of violence. As for ...

You scare me some times Bob, but point nicely made. I think that a lot of current tensions between the Islamic community and wider society could have been avoided if ...

Well I've usually written by computer. I dont like writing it myself for some reason ... usually becuase I continually scribble out sentences and write them again. Looks dirty. But ...

I dont think Muslim's are intolerant to other religions. Well, I cant account for the people, but I can for the religion. It has to be the only one that ...

Are they saying that Islam the religion is going to cause the collapse of civilisation? Or that the concept of submission epitomised and encapsulated by it is the danger? I'll ...

Well written, but I agree with Kat. Too short. And as to the quote she put up, I think there should be a space after the ellipse. I could be ...

Well I'm in agreement with pretty much whats already been said. Not really helping, I know. Just wanted to say, 'Tentative.' Check title.