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Hahaha, thanks lexy. Tis appreciated.

Yep, that is a good thing and it does no harm to our writing experience either. It's not like we're doing anything drastic here, just creating diolgue between characters which ...

Yeah, this should be in poetry lol. heatr heart forevere forever but within the darkness an endless shadow life shall endure if it becomes a blaze I think this passage ...

Count: 106 -- close enough. The portrait was exquisite; a masterpiece. Depicting a woman, an expression of infinite sadness on her ivory face, bathed in the reflection of a conflagration ...

I'm going to agree with Rose here, there seems to be little to no thought put into this and the purpose? Seemingly non existent. I would recommend turning this into ...

Well, most of this was covered by Trident I see. Essentially, this is a really good short story, quite enjoyable and for the most part, very well written. However, and ...

Snoink, tell me if I've misjudged Ursa. Cyrus sighed, staring as Alden, Seraph and Valin argued with Finn; who seemed to be protesting her right to freedom. Strong minded lass, ...

How is it that Ursa can talk btw? I'm about to post, in which Cyrus will interact with her, and I want to know juts how it is she can ...

Lol, omg, this book right here, is TOTALLY the shiznit, fo sho nigga g.

I'm in agreement with Write me and Areida, thats the type of thing I ususally do. I would never ever ask my friends to help me act out one of ...

Yeah that was wrapped up pretty nicely I'd say... except I sorta left an opening in my post, at the end, for the introduction of Alden and Ursa to the ...

Yes, welcome to YWS the best site for young writers! Don't worry, we've all been where you are now, and hey if you need any help feel free to PM ...

Boobs. Just wanted to mention that most of the suggestions are like, paragraph's lol. Oh and Surreal=absolutely hilarious. I actually liked the santa claus one.

Not sure if any of you are aware, but not too long ago, on the Conan O'Brien show, he accidentally mentioned 'www.hornymanatee.com' as part of a gag. Following the show ...

Yes, I am reading it now and I swear I've seen some better stuff here on this site! Still, it is easily readable so there's not much reason to stop ...