Jiggity

Hahaha, lol. I'll give it a shot if you want, and which story do you speak of? Not the one, snoinkle and I were talking about lol, it doesn't really ...

But I'm tired .. can't Brad do it for me, lol. Of course I want to get better at writing poetry, but I hardly think its going to happen overnight. ...

Hahaha, lol. Especially cos you and smaur tore up that one particular, ill-fated story. Which btw, I have not given up on -- well, in a sense I have, cos ...

Thanks a lot you two, your work is much appreciated. Bubbles, my brain isnt working too well, I am violently sleep deprived so my re-arranging and polishing skills are, like ...

Well, I think its finally time for me to write something up about ... me. Actually though, I'm only doing this to stave off the ever growing boredom and exhaustion ...

Whoa, first of all kudos for the length and rhyming which wasn't all that forced in some places. It was a bit overwhelming, in the sense that there's no indents...kinda ...

Thinking; unending stasis, a living death self perpetuating in the darkness Periods of activity, interspersed by static pulses: there’s an absence of feeling. images perceived and not understood fli

Granted, but now you cant get rid of them and they pile up, drowning you. I wish my every need was catered for

Granted, but it gets stuck to your floor and its stink fills your room for weeks. I wish I was wealthy.

Granted, but now everyone knows exactly what your talking about, so you dont seem terribly clever anymore. ^_~ Ha, I wish I were more experienced with the opposite sex,

Nice little poem Snoinkles, I quite like it. I didn't get the capitalization of warmth and sunlight; that threw me off a little. There seems to no point to it. ...

Agreed. That sounds about right.

Wow. Rave review! Woo! Thanks a lot Rose, the idea of the Notweb and indeed the whole story comes from a picture in the Fantasy Fools usergroup. I hadn't thought ...

Granted, but both Imp and Jiggity die after senseless years of battle, for neither could give in. Stalemate. I wish I was more athletically inclined

*screams and dies* Granted, but ... *sobs, this is cruelty* then Jiggity would get bored and lazy. Oh that was mean. I wish Imp becomes the greatest Olympic fencer and ...