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5/10--I can't tell what the thing above the piano is ,,,

The main thing I dislike is being reduced to a bodyguard ... I mean Cyrus would do it, has done it before in fact, but for an Elf? Thats a ...

What the bleedin hell is happening? I hate when something momentous happens in the stroybook that wasnt first voiced here. Pisses me off. What the hell is going on Grif?? ...

XD! Woo!! Motivation lol, I've been procrastinating horribly. But I shall get to it soon enough; dont put pressure, in the form of such expectations Impy cos then it'll be ...

Cyrus stood, rooted in shock and anger. Despair wafted in the air, triumphant. Charred ruins, burnt bodies, death and horror everywhere. His company, shattered by this one fell blow and ...

Very interesting; I agree with much of what Snoinkles said, although the sunset stuff isnt really necessary. But yes, kudos on the good story...I do hope you explain how a ...

*is confused* Crysi--looking good but...not as good as the longer haired version.

Yawn, moving on. The Sinister Jigster.

I tell you, I'm very very interested in Presque Vu; sounds intriguing. I wants to read it. NOW!!!

PLACEHOLDER!!

(OOC: lol, Im going to agree with Sab there.) *** Will be posting later today.

Update: New short story planned. About a man's struggle to come to terms with the darkness inside ... with his lust to kill and other ... disturbing desires he feels ...

Well, I take it this is an attempt by you to familiarise yourself with first person writing? If so, I sympathise. I hate first person story writing, I suck at ...

Truly, I agree with Sab--wtf?! And I edited my post

Thanks all, your help is appreciated. Clau, Impy--nice pick ups, I edited slightly to make up for some of those things. Hope its better. DD>>Thanks, lol. All the best to ...