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7/10--I dont like the second one, but the other's are cool. Sab--I meant only that Ive seen it before and have nothing more to say on it, lol.

WOO!! My first piece is getting published!! Interestingly enough, it happens to be non-fiction. I wonder if that bodes well for my fiction writing career. But yay anyway! First time ...

I do believe she mentioned Turkey, Wiggy, lol. Congrats, Sohini.

LOL, am I meant to buy that XD? Hmmph, I suppose when I get the money, I'll do that, if only out of curiosity. More likely I'll see if there's ...

I had difficulty understanding this. Especially just who exactly it was whose POV we were sharing. Thats the clicnher there, cos I thought I knew but apparently I was wrong. ...

I was under the impression that the term is actually spelt, 'Sidhe'. I wasnt 100% certain of that so I looked it up and found I was right whereas 'Sidh' ...

7/10 -- not much to say.

That makes sense I suppose, yes, I will change that. The demon did want that, he didnt need a body though, just a soul. And he got that. Lol, thank ...

4/10--meh.

It's definetly longer, and perhaps more unwgainly then something I'd usually write. But then, I didnt want to leave it unresolved so I continued it. As to your critique--and I ...

where the back of my color chaffed collar. He perfectly at home in the dark, traipsing across He was He spoke but his words were so soft that I had ...

7/10--ok.

Just a short comment: shouldnt it be hung? I'm not really sure though ... that is all, lol.

Are you implying my competition prior to this, was meager or less then stellar? LOL, I dont think so, but I'll agree with you in that I've got more then ...

Snoink, who said he was responsible for taxes, governemnt and the like? As for your comments, what absolute crap. So there were a few, a FEW, grammatical errors. Dialogue has ...