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I'll second that, but yessum, I do.

ideal place to act out the dramas of their minds This is an awkward sentence that doesn't wuite make sense. I think something like, 'ideal place to act out imagined ...

The human had eyes as blue and the ocean. I think perhaps you missed, 'deep as' after 'and'. Otherwise 'and' needs to be changed to 'as'. He had pale like ...

... sounds delicious? wtf?! Thats just strange looney, lol. Romance and horror? ... hmm, I have my reservations about such a blend, but I'll withold judgement till I see some ...

Hahaha, yes thats a good tip Waffles. Go fantasy lovers! Garth Nix is a legend lol. Good luck with your story and welcome.

Whoa. That is awesome. Plain and simple. Only thing I could see, was 'the trump of God resounds' I think thats meant to be trumpet. Nevertheless, this was just awesome.

7/10--again, I loikes the second one.

Cheers Wiggy, glad you liked it.

*twitches*

I AM THE PENGUIN OVERLORD!! NO ONE WILL DEFEAT MY ARMY OF RADIOACTIVE PENGUINS!!! ---radioactive to withstand global warming, so ha! to all you bastards that pointed that out--- ... ...

And I am oh so close to writing it Myth, the beggining scene finally came to me!! Irritatingly enough, it also came with an alternate version of it so now ...

7/10--love the second one. Kinda. LOL--sorry sab, I will change it back ... eventually.

Hahaha, thank you all. Undoubtedly Impy, your correct, with more precision and etc it might be more funny, I'm not sure if i'm too concerned about that though. Thanks Boheme, ...

Um, okay. NOTE: This is just a short parody thingo that I wrote. No offence was intended. Thanks.

There was a table; a simple, real object, in a world of weightless nothingness. Around it sat several figures, all of striking appearance. One, a massive bald man, sat with ...