Jiggity

Chapter 1. Portents. Kay awoke, grimacing. His head pounded and he squeezed his eyes shut against the light that seemed to stab into his vulnerable flesh. He hawked roughly and ...

Hahaha, Chester hsve no fear, it is as the Twit said. I like writing horror myself, and I've never had a problem placing it. You won't be able to find ...

Fanfiction doesn't have to remain true to the story people! That's the whole point, taking it places the original didn't go. It doesn't matter anyway, I'm rearranging this so it ...

Its not really a beginning, so much as a fragment lol. I did think, as I was writing it, that I could make it a beginning and go from there, ...

Prologue: An Ill wind. The little boy giggled. He sat amongst the tall, swaying grass and playfully snatched at the lights. Small, glowing balls of colour that floated about, somehow ...

Yes, my other works... are more me, I guess lol. This was a deliberate attempt to say as little as possible. Seems to have worked and p***ed of everyone in ...

What came before wasn't the focus, nor is it, I think necessary. Its omission is meant to make you think about it, yes, but feel? I don't know if that ...

Her job, I thought, was to sing for the dead. Like Death's own professional mourner; its a nice thought, lol. I think, also, that the plot will somehow revolve around ...

Ah, nicely done Tri. I can see that the sentence structure is a deliberate stylistic technique, however, I think perhaps you could change it, so rather then describing it in ...

Excellent, thanks a lot for the comments! Tri, im glad you picked up on the saying little to emphasise what was left unsaid thing. This was, and I think all ...

Bare feet walked silently across the autumn leaves and broken cobblestones [s]that masqueraded as pathways[/s] Take out 'the' and it will work nicely thus. Pale fingertips caressed the rough headstone

WOO! A response! Lol, thanks a lot Loony, tis appreciated. And um, obviously its not finished so dont go anywhere. Seriously, dont move. *glares*

5/10 I was confused.

I usually get a decent bunch of replies for things I write... but recently, I dont know, has there been a general lessening in posting? Haha, well I shall wait ...

No matter what he did, or where he decided to go, he always ended up here. He exhaled slowly, breath frosting in the air before him. He was alone. It ...